Sunday, September 30, 2012

Dance

I hear the pounding of the loud beat. It cause the whole room, the ground, the walls to move along with it. As I walk, the vibrations from the ground creep up my legs and the music over takes me. I am dancing. My body can't resist. Dance is the language my body chooses to use.

I remember the previous night. My mom calls to me from upstairs. It it on, my favorite show, So You Think You Can Dance. I leap up the stairs and quickly seat myself on the couch. On the screen I see four people. Music begins to blare and fills up the whole stage. The four are speaking to me,  telling me their story. I see sharp sudden movements, each part of their body moving to the exact timing of the music. I can't tell the difference from the music to the dancers as they all become one. They are angry. I can tell from the way they fling their arms the way their feet smack the ground with much strength. Their faces become contorted. The whole stage is alive as the lights move with them. As I watch my body responds with the same intensity. My adrenaline is pumping. I feel the movements the dancers are painting so vividly with their bodies. All of the sudden it stops. The dancers are still. My hair stands on end. I am hypnotized. I have to watch it again I tell myself. I rewind.

As I'm dancing I think of the four on stage. What they were telling me. What am I telling others right now? I flow with the music. The music and I become one. I feel alive. I look around. My friends flail their arms, their heads pound, they move together in a similar fashion. Their faces are bright, their eyes wild. I see they are excited. Others stand around tapping their feet. Some walk to the beat. Everyone in the room becomes alive all moving to the language they choose to speak with. For the next two minutes we are all absorbed into a new world of thinking a new way to display our innermost emotions. For the next couple of minutes we read the beat. We speak it. We dance.



2 comments:

  1. Very nice blog. I loved the way you mentioned dancing as a beat or rhythm. I also loved how you applied watching others dance on TV to how you dance. Describing dance as a way to communicate with audience was a very strong point you made that I agree with. One recommendation I would make is to include picture. Pictures will not only help you bring across your argument, but will also lighten up the mood of the blog. I recommend you add a layout background as well to make the blog look better.

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  2. You seem to be expressing sincere passion in this blog and that is a very admirable quality. I like the hard hitting verbs you use such as "pound", "leap", and "blare" as well. They make the action vivid. In emotional terms, I really liked this blog.

    In AP English terms, there are some things you could do to make this better. When you use listing sentences such as the second sentence of the first paragraph or the eighth sentence of the final paragraph, connect your ideas with "and" after the final paragraph. Also when you're describing the dancers' effect on you, I'm not sure "painting" is the best word to describe dance impressions. Lastly, try not to overdo short sentences. Think about that one essay we read about how long sentences help readers unwind and get really into what they are reading.

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